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Hiding behind a curtain I peek,
Unready to spark a move.
There she lies, not far from me,
A figure of perfection.
Though she entranced me,
Captured my heart like cheese to a mouse...
Irresistable, the feeling.
Yet I resist.

I ask myself.
Why?
Do I not wish to find out,
If my soul mate is her that lies within my eyes?
Yes, why I do.

Except, what if this is all...
A mistake?
She might already be "taken,"
Already loving and loved by another.
Then, wouldn't my approaching her,
Break their relationship,
Just like I have done to another?
A monster, I call myself.

But yet, she was all I could think about.
An endless sphere of continuity,
My feelings revolve.
I cannot bear it anymore,
But what shall I do?
©2007-2009 ~AbyssalFaith
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Author's Comments

This was something I've been wanting to write for quite a while... Its based on a true story, and I don't suppose the girl in question realizes this just yet.

I'm not really a fan of long poems, so I decided to stick with my system of 4 stanzas. Hope it doesn't seem rushed... too much.

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Hehe, nice poem. I think we can all relate to that kind of feeling. Don't mean to be annoying, but there's a slight spelling error in the word irresistible.

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He who laughs last, thinks the slowest. -Anonymous

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